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cyn ([personal profile] fairytales) wrote in [personal profile] imaginedyou 2011-11-02 10:07 pm (UTC)

It feels like there are two conversations going on between Ankh and Shingo - their discussion about what happened and what didn't and also something deeper. Or perhaps it feels like they are both having their own conversations, with no need to fill in the blanks.

I love this. Especially the last few lines. Ankh admitting he came back as quickly as he could, Shingo dragging it out of him. Somehow, I feel like you have it completely right - Shingo would be the closest to him.

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